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Lindsey Lane on Storytelling + Evidence of Things Not Seen

Evidence of Things Unseen by Lindsey Lane

(From Lindsey Lane:) When I go into a school for an author visit, I always tell students that the cool thing about writing is that there are no right or wrong answers. There’s spelling. There’s grammar and punctuation. But really, there is no right way to tell a story. For me, as long as I’m telling a story that is true to a character’s heart then I’m doing my job as a writer.

When I started writing EVIDENCE OF THINGS NOT SEEN, it was a series of linked short stories, all of which occurred around a patch of dirt by the side of the road, which is called a pull-out. You see, I woke up from a dream and saw a boy standing in a pull out and wondered what the heck he was doing there. Then a lot of different characters showed up at the pull out, each for a different reason, each with a different desire. Eventually I discovered Tommy, a brilliant, socially awkward high school boy who goes missing from that pull out. Once I ‘found’ Tommy, I knew his absence could pull all the stories together. In a weird way, Tommy would be the negative space at the heart of the novel around which all the stories of the people in the town revolved, only their stories would be a bit off course in the way that things go a bit wobbly when someone is missing.

That’s also when I added the fist person sections of the kids talking to the Sheriff about Tommy. I needed the urgency of their voices and their knowledge of Tommy to weave the world of the novel together. I took a risk interjecting first person sections with the third person stories. I mean, in the end, the reader of EVIDENCE steps into the perspective of twenty-one characters. That’s a lot to ask a reader but I think we live in this crazy exciting time as storytellers. Graphic novels. Fan fiction. Flash fiction. Novels in verse. It’s insane. And that’s just the reading format. If you turn on the television or go to the movies and plays, writers are taking big risks with story telling. Leaps in time, point of view shifts, simultaneous realities are all pretty common now. Do they all work? Probably not. But if your story is true to a character’s heart, your reader will go anywhere with you.

About EVIDENCE OF THINGS NOT SEEN: When high school junior Tommy Smythe goes missing, everyone has a theory about what happened to him. He was an odd kid, often deeply involved in particle physics, so maybe he just got distracted and wandered off. He was last seen at a pullout off the highway, so maybe someone snatched him. Tommy believes that everything is possible, and that until something can be proven false, it may be true. So as long as Tommy’s whereabouts are undetermined, he could literally be anywhere.

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Lindsey Lane AuthorAbout LINDSEY LANE:  Award-winning author Lindsey Lane is proud to announce her debut YA novel EVIDENCE OF THINGS NOT SEEN will be published by Farrar Straus Giroux Books for Young Readers on September 16, 2014. Her picture book SNUGGLE MOUNTAIN (Clarion, 2003) is now available as an iTunes app, which Digital Storytime describes as “heartwarming and adorable with rich illustrations and lyrical text.” In 2010, Lindsey received her MFA in Writing for Children and Young Adults from Vermont College of Fine Arts. Lindsey is a featured presenter at many schools where she gets kids (of all ages) excited about writing. When she is not writing, reading or being a mom, Lindsey loves sweating at Bikkram yoga, seeing movies and plays, and enjoying some of the outrageously good food at Austin restaurants with friends.

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October 8, 2014 - 10:50 pm

Alexa S. - I really agree with Lindsey – there’s no right or wrong way to tell a story! There are just plenty of different ways that will work in different mediums and for different people. Really enjoyed reading her guest post!

September 25, 2014 - 2:11 pm

Lindsey Lane - Thank you for letting me stop by and share my storytelling thoughts with your readers.

September 25, 2014 - 12:01 am

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Pub Date: Fall Fest (Brews + a Book)

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Our apartment windows are open; there’s pumpkin spice everywhere. Did you ever notice how people don’t know how to dress when seasons change? Some in shorts, others in boots while all the beer taps have had Oktoberfest and pumpkin-whatever for the last four weeks. (Sigh. The damn holiday creep.) Anyway, I’m glad the cooler weather cooperated with my round of Pub Date. Last week, Brittany kicked us off with a fall brew and I’m up to bat next with one of the books I treasure the most.

Here we go…

Narraganset Fest Lager and Openly Straight by Bill Konisberg

Narragansett Fest Lager = yum. I have never had a fall beer in a can (this is a new development) and I liked that even though this beer was heavier than I’ve been used to all summer, it was still on the light side. This beer is New England’s oldest beer and the official beer of the Red Sox  (I know this makes Andi happy) which segues perfectly into my book pick: Openly Straight (my review from last summer).

Bill Konisberg has created one of my favorite books in the world about a character named Rafe who escapes his open town in Colorado where he is a celebrated gay teenager to a boarding school in New England where he doesn’t want to be defined by his sexuality at all. It works for a time, until it just can’t anymore. New friends, new feelings, and dealing with all he has left behind = a book full of such heart and honesty. Everyone needs to red this, and then pop open a Narragansett. (Lots of baseball jokes in the book too.)

For me more than any other season, fall feels like a new beginning. After sweating through the summer, it’s nice to snuggle into the comfort of your warmer clothes, seeking out the drinks and snacks you forgot about in the summer, and breathing in that fresh air. People go back to school, leaves start to fall from the trees and nothing beats an autumn in the Northeast. (I’m biased, probably.) Rafe’s time at boarding school, and his extreme efforts to keep who he really is a secret because he’s not sure that’s who he should have to be pair so perfectly with a less intense first brew for your fall.

As a bonus recommendation, try out Peak Organic Hop Harvest Oktoberfest.

As always, cheers and happy reading!:)

Psst. Don’t forget to leave any of your own fall beer recommendations below!

October 8, 2014 - 10:48 pm

Alexa S. - I just love seeing what beers you guys pick for each Pub Date post! That’s the fun part for me (and a great way for me to find recommendations from y’all). Also, I’ve not yet read Openly Straight, but I definitely want to. Add it to the TBR pile threatening to fall onto my head at any moment!

September 20, 2014 - 3:22 am

Cassie - FALL BEER IN A CAN!?? Can that sentence get better??? I THINK NOT! Plus, I’ve wanted to read this SINCE your review! 😀 I continue to ADORE this feature!!! <3 <3 xxoxoo

September 19, 2014 - 10:49 am

Brianna - Fall is my favorite time of year. We are not yet having fall in Northern Nevada, but I hope it hurries up. I want to wear pants and boots and sweaters. I am tired of dresses and sandals.

September 19, 2014 - 10:17 am

Mary @ BookSwarm - I’m in love with this post concept! As a beer & book lover myself, I have to admit that a good brew with a good book equals a near-perfect afternoon for me. I’m adding both the book and the beer to my to-try list. Cheers!

September 19, 2014 - 9:18 am

Brittany @ The Book Addict's Guide - This book wasn’t on my radar before but it sounds really interesting! What do you think… Brittany book?
Ahh I get so jealous of everyone else’s local beers. I always feel like Chicagoland doesn’t have a lot of good local brews. But maybe I’m just used to them haha! They both look great! 😀

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Estelle: Jessica Darling’s IT List 2 by Megan McCafferty

Jessica DarlingJessica Darling’s IT List 2 by Megan McCafferty ( web | tweet )
Publication Date: 9/16/2014
Publisher: Little, Brown Books for Young Readers
Pages: 208
Target audience: middle grade/JD fans!
Keywords: making friends, middle school, big sisters, family
Format read: ARC from Elena at Novel Sounds. (Thanks!)

Summary: Despite the “luck” she had with the last IT list her sister passed on to her, Jessica needs all the help she can get as old friendships change and new ones in emerge.

While reading Jessica Darling’s IT List Part 2, I was reminded of how much Jessica marches to her own drum. Even though she gets comments on the old band t-shirts she loves to wear and how she wants to dress up like the Periodical Table of Elements for Halloween, she doesn’t change.

The fact that those things stay put when she is literally (I used it right!) questioning everything about her life? Totally admirable.

In the second book of this middle grade series, Jessica is navigating friendships like whoa. Her best friend Bridget seems to be relying more and more on the popular crowd and putting a lot of effort into her boyfriend. Then there’s Hope, who is someone Jess really clicks with but can be so hot and cold. And what about the girls on the track team? How does she know what’s real and what’s not when it seems like her longest and most important friendship is crumbling?

One of the the biggest highlights of this book for me was Jessica’s relationship with her grandma. With her parents so occupied, her grandmother is staying with them for a few weeks and I loved the sounding board she provided when Jessica was feeling a little lost. Not going to lie — made me tear up in some spots because of my own close relationship with my grandma at that age. It was a nice touch to have her a part of the story.

Once again, reading this brought me back to so many of the titles I loved at this age and also made me want to dust off my copy of Sloppy Firsts and get addicted to this heroine from the beginning I know best. I love that these books serve two purposes: entertaining young readers with realistic story lines and a pinch of humor and reminding us Jessica veterans why she is so important to us.

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January 4, 2015 - 9:01 am

A Tribute to 2014: End of Year Survey | Estelle - […] Jessica Darling’s IT List 2 was fantastically charming and funny; Complete Nothing by Kieran Scott was a nice look at a serious couple in high school struggling with all the challenges graduation brings. (This Cupid stuck in NJ series is just hilarious.) […]

September 17, 2014 - 11:57 pm

elena - you review made me re-affirm that i REALLY need to re-read the jessica darling series!! this sounds like a delightful middle grade and yay grandma relationships. sounds like the perfect amount of nostalgia!

September 17, 2014 - 2:52 pm

Quinn @ Quinn's Book Nook - I recently brought the first book in this It List series home. I’m excited to read it. It looks soooo cute!

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Estelle: The Bridge from Me to You by Lisa Schroeder

The Bridge from Me to You by Lisa SchroederThe Bridge from Me to You by Lisa Schroeder ( web | tweet )
Publication Date: July 29, 2014
Publisher: Scholastic Point
Pages: 336
Target audience: young adult/verse fans
Keywords: senior year, family secrets, pressure from parents, football, small town
Format read: ARC from Publisher via NetGalley. (Thanks!)

Summary: Lauren is suddenly living in the small town when her aunt and uncle take her in. Colby is a star on the high school football team and as pressure to pick a college mounts, he wonders if anyone close to him knows him at all. A friendship forms between Lauren and Colby, unable to go any further but as they both have difficulties to face, they may need each other more than they think.

The two things I really love about verse books done right is how swiftly they move, and how much emotion they can evoke in a short block of words. Schroeder took an different angle with verse in The Bridge from Me to You: Lauren got the verse chapters and Colby’s was written in regular prose. This is where I wish I would have read a finished copy of this book because the formatting of Lauren’s pages were all over the place and I didn’t realize it was poetry vs. prose until a bit of the way in.

Anyway. Lauren and Colby are two really nice people. Even though Lauren has been shipped off to her uncle’s by her mother and Colby lost his mom, they are both people who are positive, fiercely care about their friends and family, and are determined to have great futures. It’s all the other factors in their lives that are affecting those happy endings. Not only has Lauren been cut off from her mom but her younger brother, and Colby can’t seem to stand up to his dad about his desire to study engineering in college and retire his football jersey for good.

Despite a great time hanging out the first time, Lauren and Colby’s friendship isn’t instantaneous. When Colby’s best friend gets in a terrible accident, he’s distracted and distant and it takes time before they find themselves in the same place. Colby and Lauren are very at ease with each other; I think it helps that Colby has someone to talk to who isn’t associated with their small town and vice versa, Colby doesn’t know Lauren’s mom. For both, it’s a blank slate.

Focused on having something instead of nothing, Lauren and Colby decide to focus on friendship even though they clearly want more. On each side, there is building pressure as Lauren must come to terms with the truth about her family and Colby has to make some serious decisions about what he will be doing next year. Verse and prose combination made the 300-plus pages fly by so fast, and I loved getting to be a part of this tiny football-loving town for a little while.

That being said, the writing style of the book made the characters feel younger than seniors. I wonder if Lauren’s poetry should have been a supplement to her own prose because there could have been so much more meat to her story. Same with Colby. With his best friend in the hospital and the trouble he has being honest with his dad, there was definitely more of an opportunity to dig deeper in this story. All “issues” seemed to solve themselves pretty quickly, and I would have loved to get more from the secondary characters.

The Bridge from Me to You was a welcome break to a long-string of prose books. In fact, it’s the first verse book I’ve read all year. It was a sweet, feel-good read, and the many mentions of junk food and baked goods (berry pie!) made me wish I had one by my side at all times.

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October 8, 2014 - 10:46 pm

Alexa S. - The Bridge From Me To You sounds pretty great! I like that we’re in the heads of both these characters, and that their perspectives are set apart by HOW the story is told (one in prose, one in verse). I’m curious to find out what’s really going on in both Colby and Lauren’s heads!

September 16, 2014 - 11:37 am

Brianna - I adore books written in verse, but firmly believe they need to be read in physical form. The formatting on Kindle, even finished, is always off.

September 15, 2014 - 2:07 pm

Sue - This looks good. Great review.

September 15, 2014 - 12:33 pm

Quinn @ Quinn's Book Nook - I really, really enjoyed The Bridge from Me to You. But I do see what you mean, about the possibilities for digging deeper into both Colby and Lauren’s feelings.

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Estelle: Make It Right by Megan Erickson

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Part of the Bowler University series but can be read as standalones.
Publication Date: September 8, 2014
Publisher: William Morrow Impulse
Pages: 384
Target audience: Young adult/new adult
Keywords: college, forgiveness, post-graduation plans, trust
Format read: ARC from Publisher via Edelweiss. (Thanks!)

Summary: After mistakes he made last year, Max has sworn off girls for good. His focus is graduation and a job with the family business that he is not looking forward to at all. But a few chance run-ins with Lea, a girl from school, makes him rethink his break from dating. Can he ditch the cocky attitude and have a meaningful relationship?

I’ll be honest. I wasn’t much of a Max fan when I read Make It Count. In fact, it surprised me that author Megan Erickson decided to have her next book in this companion series focus on him. I knew that Max would have a lot of work to do for me to me to not only care about him but believe in his transformation.

Well, I’m happy to say that Megan did another standout job with her characters in Make It Right. Most importantly, learning more about Max did not get him off the hook for past actions either. By hitting his lowest point, he was almost putting more pressure on himself to do better and think more about other’s feelings. In the beginning of this book, I was glad to see Max is actively creating boundaries between who he was and who he wanted to be. I think that was an important first step to getting him as a character. We all make mistakes, but it’s what we do next that means the most.

Did I mention he takes in a homeless cat, bakes like a champ, and can sing?


While Max is dealing with just about everything, he keeps bumping into Lea. In fact, he gets totally beat to a pulp by her when he volunteers to be an attacker during a self-defense class. (I liked this plotline!) She’s really good at reading people, and she wonders which side of Max is the real one: the cocky lady killer or the guy who will drop everything to bring her to the hospital when her friend is hurt? She hopes it’s the second one, and her curiosity gets the best of her when she decides to go on a date with him.

Lea is wrestling with some overarching trust issues from a horrific childhood accident that caused her limp. But she doesn’t let her disability get the best of her. No way. She’s totally kick ass, black belt, and all powerful. I loved that she had this tough exterior while her insides were working to catch up. (There are some other sexy details about her but I’m going to let you discover those yourself.) Her strength and sensitivity make her the most ideal match for Max. That’s for sure.

Here’s what I have grown to adore about Erickson: all of her characters have baggage but it’s the relatable kind. (Revolutionary, I know.) Learning to stand up to your parents, carve your own path, learning to trust yourself and your instincts. While Max and Lea do gain a lot as they get to know each other, their efforts to find happiness don’t end with the promise of romance.

Again, Erickson has delivered a sassy, sexy, and addicting new adult story. Make It Right belongs in your queue.

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January 12, 2015 - 9:00 am

Make It Last by Megan Erickson | Estelle Reviews, Estelle - […] Make It Last by Megan Erickson ( web | tweet | facebook ) Part of Bowler University new adult series. Published January 6, 2015 from William Morrow Impulse Pages: 384 Format read: ARC from Publisher via Edelweiss (Thank you!) Last reviewed: Make It Right […]

October 8, 2014 - 10:40 pm

Alexa S. - I really enjoyed Make It Right! I’m a sucker for a good redemption story, and Erickson did a great job with Max. I liked getting to know him a little bit better, and understanding what makes him the way he is! Plus, his efforts to change and grow? Solid. I also really liked Lea! Plus, their romance just made me very, very happy :)

September 19, 2014 - 9:19 pm

Danielle @ Love at First Page - Great review! I just read both books back to back and was very happy with how light and fun they were. Not too much angst or pain-filled baggage. I agree – Max’s journey was very realistic and we get a great understanding of why he behaved so badly in the first book.
Very excited for Cam’s book!

September 12, 2014 - 12:09 pm

Wendy @ Book Scents - This sounds really good! I like that the baggage is relatable! When characters have baggage that just starts to be over the top and way too much, it totally bugs me. I’m definitely going to have to check out this series!

September 12, 2014 - 12:06 pm

Quinn @ Quinn's Book Nook - I recently read Make It Right. I thought it was cute. I haven’t read Make It Count, so I didn’t know Max from that. But I got the feeling he was a total jerk. I actually really like when authors take total jerks and make them into heroes, although that isn’t always easily done.

Have you read Devil in Winter by Lisa Kleypas? That’s a historical romance and whoa does Kleypas create a total jerk and then redeem him.

September 12, 2014 - 11:50 am

Asheley (@BookwormAsheley) - This is the second review I’ve seen for this book and they’ve both been positive! It sounds like something I’d like. I read yesterday that this one is kind of like a second chance story, and I always tend to like those. ALSO I like it when there is a character that I’m not too sure about but he/she ends up winning me over in the end – in the past that character has sometimes been my favorite of the series. This sounds fun, E!

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Estelle: Expecting by Ann Lewis Hamilton

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Publication Date: July 1, 2014
Publisher: Sourcebooks
Pages: 340
Target audience: Adult
Keywords: pregnancy, miscarriages, fertility treatment, unconventional families
Format read: ARC from Publisher via NetGalley. (Thanks!)

Summary: After suffering two miscarriages, Laurie and Alan are thrilled when their fertility treatment takes & “Buddy” is on his way to them. But news from the treatment center changes things, challenging their marriage, and altering how the two think of their family and Buddy’s future.

One thing that really struck me about Laurie and Alan’s marriage was how laidback it was. They laughed together, they went on adventures, and it’s not until they are about to embark on a different adventure that things start to unravel for the two. Ann Lewis Hamilton gives us an honest and (at times) heartbreaking look into how partnerships are affected when unexplained tragedies occur. Why do some couples conceive so easily and why do others not have that same kind of luck?

Post-happy news after a visit to the fertility treatment brings some unusual revelations. An angry employee has switched all the vials, and it seems that Laurie is not having Alan’s baby but someone else’s. Now, Jack, 5-year college student, juggler of multiple girlfriends, enters their lives. Laurie is focused on making the best of the situation and having some sort of relationship with him, while Alan can’t help but feel insecure about his role in the family now. (One of Alan’s big concerns is how his son will most likely not look like him because Jack is Indian.)

Expecting shifts POVs between Laurie, Alan, and Jack so the readers are privy to their innermost thoughts — sad, happy, angry, and mean — and it was a treat to watch how these three took an accident and made it work for them. There were a ton of road blocks along the way, but Jack injected a breath of fresh air into the story and really made it work for me. I loved his growing friendship with Laurie, and how much he thought about Buddy, even when Buddy was someone he never imagined caring about. (Not cool he was dating two girls at once but the personalities of both girls were fantastic and made for some very comical moments in the story.)

There were parts of the story that dragged for me, and Expecting took me longer to read than usual. Was it the lack of urgency? Sometimes a lack of connection with the characters? I think so, but it didn’t stop be from enjoying the high moments and sympathizing when life was so messy and out of control. Hamilton allowed us to see the weaker sides of these characters, and I appreciated the authenticity.

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October 8, 2014 - 10:36 pm

Alexa S. - To me, Expecting is an interesting book because it appears that it challenges the reader to see this story from the perspective of three characters with different feelings about the situation that ties them all together. I’m definitely curious to find out how the three of them work things out!

September 11, 2014 - 9:40 am

Asheley (@BookwormAsheley) - This sounds interesting, Estelle! I’m not sure that I’ve read a book like this yet. The cover freaked me out a little bit but your review makes it sound like something I would read! Love that it is all three POV’s!

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